HEEEEY!!! Sry, I haven't posted in SUCH a long while. But don't worry, I'll probably post a lot through summer!!!
Now, important news. I got a new blog, but that's for my author side. YA KNOW.
Andddd, we gonna link it to my amazon profile where people can read my updates and stuff!!!
Problem tho, we have GOT to think of post ideas.
SO. Anybody got any thoughts on what to post?
Also, this guy reviewed my book and his review was poor LOL. I reviewed/commented on his review, but I did two. One kinder and more professional, one meaner LOL
Here:
Hi! You're right, I'm actually a middle school student whose personality is how you described.
Now, about the comments that you've said. I understand that you didn't know I'm only in middle school and that you probably wrote this while comparing it to more professional books. But I do want to ask a few questions. As a growing writer, I want to know more about what you actually mean in your comments. The writing style is supposed to be big and exciting like how you described it. Roxalina's personality is like that, and since we're narrating in her point of view, the writing would be like that.
What do you mean by setting? Because I do think I have many places as settings, but that's just what I see.
Do you have any examples of when some characters jump through emotions and moods? And what do you exactly mean by that? Do you mean that the characters randomly change emotions? I'm sure they do, but of course there are reasons behind why they feel the way they do.
And please tell me more about why you're confused, I would like to know. As for the title of your comment, you described my book as "a mess". Is it a mess? I know you said why in the comment, but for me, it still doesn't make sense. I can see that there is a storyline that I can follow. Can you tell me why you think it's a mess? As the author, I can't really see what the readers see.
Also, I'm not offended that you said things like "written by a child hopped up on energy drinks". Because that (unsurprisingly and surprisingly) is who I actually am.
Have a nice day :)
That's kind
and:
Hello. So I just read over your comment and I really REALLY have to say. It is a mess. Honestly, it is really choppy and strangely written like it was written by a "random man who doesn't do his research". Oh, wait! That's you!! I have got to say, I am a child by the way. And I have a LOT of questions. Number one. How don't I have a setting? I'm really confused by that. I have MANY settings actually. Number two. Being excited and all SUPER LIKE THIS is Roxalina's personality, and we're narrating from her point of view. Maybe be a better reader next time and realize that :). Number three. Characters jumping from emotions. They do change emotions a lot, but what is wrong with that? No, but actually, what's wrong with that. What if I said my characters are naturally moody, would you accept that? You want to know why your comment is choppy? Sure! I'll explain it better than you did! Well, first of all, your comment was very confusing. I understood the base of it but I really don't get most of it. What do you mean by no settings? What is wrong with jumping from emotions? What is wrong with it written like that? How is it choppy? Your explanation is clearly choppy and so unclear that I have to write a comment back to ask for more info! Oh, so you're saying that you're a reader and not a writer? You write reviews. I looked at your profile and saw you write tons of reviews that some of them I could actually get. If you're not a writer, that's understandable. But as a reviewer, you have to know how to write reviews. Right? Oh, look! I did my research! Also, if it was a mess, why couldn't you stop reading it lol. Also also, I see that you insulted children who are hopped up on energy drinks. So you're saying excited and happy children are bad? You're weird. And in the conclusion of my way more informative and insulting comment, I'd like you in the future to do better at your reviews. Have a nice life! :)
Which one do you like more LOL:)
